The best time for tourist to come to NZ is in the winter so they can look at all the beautiful views and flowers and they can go skiing at Mount Ruapehu and you can climb it and have good fun it is good fun if you go to Taupo Hot Springs
Hello Cooper, Don't forget the full stops! I think that you should really proof read your writing. There are a lot of grammar probles, like you didn't even put ONE comma in the writing. But you did super well in putting the capital letters on names. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to comment on more of your writings! (And do take my advice, I think that it will help you improve your writing a lot.)
True winter is the best my b-day is in winter
ReplyDeleteHello Cooper,
ReplyDeleteDon't forget the full stops! I think that you should really proof read your writing. There are a lot of grammar probles, like you didn't even put ONE comma in the writing. But you did super well in putting the capital letters on names. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to comment on more of your writings! (And do take my advice, I think that it will help you improve your writing a lot.)